[xiph-rtp] Updated drafts please review

[Luca Barbato]

Tor-Einar Jarnbjo wrote:
> Luca Barbato wrote:
> 
>> [2]http://svn.xiph.org/trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-01.{txt,xml}
>>
>>  
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> A few things:
> 
> 3.1.1. Last sentence: It is up to the ...

Explain the problem

> 
> 6.1.1 What is "http://another/path/to/resource/aggregate.bz2!sha1hash"
> suppose to mean?

This way looks better?

+<t hangText="configuration-uri:"> the URI of the configuration headers
in case
of out of band transmission. In the form of
"protocol://path/to/resource/". Depending on the specific method, a
single configuration packet could be retrived by its number, or multiple
packets could be aggregated in a single stream. Such aggregates MAY be
compressed using either <xref target="BZ2">bzip2</xref> or <xref
target="rfc1952">gzip</xref>. A <xref target="FIPS180">sha1</xref>
checksum MAY be provided for aggregates. In this latter case the URI
will end with the aggregate name, followed by its compressed extension
if applies, a "!" and the hexadecimal representation of the sha1hash of
the above mentioned compressed aggregatedas in:
"protocol://path/to/resource/aggregated.bz2!sha1hash".</t>

+<t>a=fmtp:98 delivery-method=in_band; configuration=base16string1;
delivery-method=out_band/rtsp;
configuration-uri=rtsp://path/to/the/resource;
delivery-method=out_band/http;
configuration-uri=http://another/path/to/resource/aggregate.bz2!8b6237eb5154a0ea12811a94e8e2697b3312bc6c;</t>

> 
> There seem to be a generally high number of punctuation mistakes in the
> text and I am not able to follow the logic behind the capitalization of
> specific words ...

Please point the cases and I'll try to fix them.

lu

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