[xiph-commits] r14681 - trunk/standards

ivo at svn.xiph.org ivo at svn.xiph.org
Tue Apr 8 15:12:58 PDT 2008


Author: ivo
Date: 2008-04-08 15:12:57 -0700 (Tue, 08 Apr 2008)
New Revision: 14681

Modified:
   trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.txt
   trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.xml
Log:
Following feedback from Alfred H?\195?\142nes: move RFC3534 to Informative References, remove internal references in static places like in Abstract and registration templates, add reference and use of RFC 4288 in section 8.

Modified: trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.txt	2008-04-08 19:27:10 UTC (rev 14680)
+++ trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.txt	2008-04-08 22:12:57 UTC (rev 14681)
@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@
 Internet-Draft                                               S. Pfeiffer
 Obsoletes: 3534 (if approved)                              C. Montgomery
 Intended status: Standards Track                                    Xiph
-Expires: October 6, 2008                                   April 4, 2008
+Expires: October 10, 2008                                  April 8, 2008
 
 
                             Ogg Media Types
-                     draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis-02
+                     draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis-03
 
 Status of This Memo
 
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
    The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at
    http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html.
 
-   This Internet-Draft will expire on October 6, 2008.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on October 10, 2008.
 
 Copyright Notice
 
@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@
 Abstract
 
    This document describes the registration of media types for the Ogg
-   [RFC3533] container format and conformance requirements for
-   implementations of these types.
+   container format and conformance requirements for implementations of
+   these types.
 
 
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 1]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 1]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 2]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 2]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 3]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 3]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 4]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 4]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 5]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 5]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -332,15 +332,16 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 6]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 6]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
 
 8.  IANA Considerations
 
-   This document registers two new media types and redefines the
-   existing application/ogg as defined in the following section.
+   In accordance with the procedures set forth in [RFC4288], this
+   document registers two new media types and redefines the existing
+   application/ogg as defined in the following section.
 
 9.  Ogg Media Types
 
@@ -360,7 +361,7 @@
 
    Interoperability considerations: None, as noted in section 7.
 
-   Published specification: [RFC3533]
+   Published specification: RFC 3533
 
    Applications which use this media type: Scientific and other
    applications which require various multiplexed signals or streams of
@@ -384,15 +385,15 @@
 
    Intended usage: COMMON
 
-   Restrictions on usage: The type application/ogg SHOULD only be used
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 7]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 7]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
 
+   Restrictions on usage: The type application/ogg SHOULD only be used
    in situations where it is not appropriate to serve data under the
    video/ogg or audio/ogg types.  Data served under the application/ogg
    type SHOULD use the .ogx file extension and MUST contain an Ogg
@@ -419,7 +420,7 @@
 
    Interoperability considerations: None, as noted in section 7.
 
-   Published specification: [RFC3533]
+   Published specification: RFC 3533
 
    Applications which use this media type: Multimedia applications,
    including hardware-based, streaming, and conferencing tools.
@@ -440,15 +441,15 @@
 
    Restrictions on usage: The type "video/ogg" SHOULD be used for Ogg
    bitstreams containing visual, audio, timed text, or any other type of
-   material that requires a visual interface.  It is intended for
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 8]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 8]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
 
+   material that requires a visual interface.  It is intended for
    content not complex enough to warrant serving under "application/
    ogg"; for example, a combination of Theora video, Vorbis audio,
    Skeleton metadata, and CMML captioning.  Data served under the type
@@ -476,7 +477,7 @@
 
    Interoperability considerations: None, as noted in section 7.
 
-   Published specification: [RFC3533]
+   Published specification: RFC 3533
 
    Applications which use this media type: Multimedia applications,
    including hardware-based, streaming, and conferencing tools.
@@ -496,15 +497,15 @@
    Intended usage: COMMON
 
    Restrictions on usage: The type "audio/ogg" SHOULD be used when the
-   Ogg bitstream predominantly contains audio data.  Content served
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008                [Page 9]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008                [Page 9]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
 
+   Ogg bitstream predominantly contains audio data.  Content served
    under the "audio/ogg" type SHOULD have an Ogg Skeleton logical
    bitstream if they use the .oga extension.  The .ogg and .spx file
    extensions are a specialization that require no Skeleton due to
@@ -531,9 +532,6 @@
    [RFC3533]   Pfeiffer, S., "The Ogg Encapsulation Format Version 0",
                RFC 3533, May 2003.
 
-   [RFC3534]   Walleij, L., "The application/ogg Media Type", RFC 3534,
-               May 2003.
-
    [RFC2045]   Freed, N. and N. Borenstein, "Multipurpose Internet Mail
                Extensions (MIME) Part One: Format of Internet Message
                Bodies", RFC 2045, November 1996.
@@ -541,6 +539,10 @@
    [RFC2119]   Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate
                Requirement Levels", BCP 14, RFC 2119, March 1997.
 
+   [RFC4288]   Freed, N. and J. Klensin, "Media Type Specifications and
+               Registration Procedures", BCP 13, RFC 4288,
+               December 2005.
+
 11.2.  Informative References
 
    [Ogg]       Xiph.Org Foundation, "Ogg bitstream documentation: Ogg
@@ -548,19 +550,23 @@
                bitstream framing, Ogg multi-stream multiplexing",
                <http://xiph.org/ogg/doc>.
 
-   [Theora]    Xiph.Org Foundation, "Theora Specification",
-               October 2007, <http://theora.org/doc/Theora_spec.pdf>.
+   [RFC3534]   Walleij, L., "The application/ogg Media Type", RFC 3534,
+               May 2003.
 
-   [Dirac]     Dirac Group, "Dirac Specification",
-               <http://dirac.sourceforge.net/specification.html>.
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008               [Page 10]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008               [Page 10]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
 
+   [Theora]    Xiph.Org Foundation, "Theora Specification",
+               October 2007, <http://theora.org/doc/Theora_spec.pdf>.
+
+   [Dirac]     Dirac Group, "Dirac Specification",
+               <http://dirac.sourceforge.net/specification.html>.
+
    [Speex]     Valin, J., "The Speex Codec Manual", February 2002,
                <http://speex.org/docs/manual/speex-manual>.
 
@@ -606,13 +612,7 @@
 
 
 
-
-
-
-
-
-
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008               [Page 11]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008               [Page 11]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008               [Page 12]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008               [Page 12]
 
 Internet-Draft               Ogg Media Types                  April 2008
 
@@ -724,5 +724,5 @@
 
 
 
-Goncalves, et al.        Expires October 6, 2008               [Page 13]
+Goncalves, et al.       Expires October 10, 2008               [Page 13]
 

Modified: trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.xml	2008-04-08 19:27:10 UTC (rev 14680)
+++ trunk/standards/draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis.xml	2008-04-08 22:12:57 UTC (rev 14681)
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 <?rfc symrefs="yes" ?>
 <?rfc rfcedstyle="yes" ?>
 
-<rfc ipr="full3978" docName="draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis-02" obsoletes="3534" category="std">
+<rfc ipr="full3978" docName="draft-goncalves-rfc3534bis-03" obsoletes="3534" category="std">
 	<front>
 		<title>Ogg Media Types</title>
 		<author initials="I.E." surname="Goncalves" fullname="Ivo Emanuel Goncalves">
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 				<uri>http://xiph.org</uri>
 			</address>
 		</author>
-		<date day="4" month="April" year="2008"/>
+		<date day="8" month="April" year="2008"/>
 		<area>Internet</area>
 		<keyword>I-D</keyword>
 		<keyword>Internet-Draft</keyword>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 		<keyword>Video</keyword>
 		<keyword>Audio</keyword>
 		<abstract>
-			<t>This document describes the registration of media types for the <xref target="RFC3533">Ogg</xref> container format and conformance requirements for implementations of these types.</t>
+			<t>This document describes the registration of media types for the Ogg container format and conformance requirements for implementations of these types.</t>
 		</abstract>
 	</front>
 	<middle>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 			<t>The Xiph.Org Foundation has defined the specification, interoperability, and conformance, and conducts regular interoperability testing.</t>
 		</section>
 		<section title="IANA Considerations">
-			<t>This document registers two new media types and redefines the existing application/ogg as defined in the following section.</t>
+			<t>In accordance with the procedures set forth in <xref target="RFC4288"/>, this document registers two new media types and redefines the existing application/ogg as defined in the following section.</t>
 		</section>
 		<section title="Ogg Media Types">
 			<section title="application/ogg">
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
 				<t>Encoding considerations: See section 5.</t>
 				<t>Security considerations: See section 6.</t>
 				<t>Interoperability considerations: None, as noted in section 7.</t>
-				<t>Published specification: <xref target="RFC3533"/></t>
+				<t>Published specification: RFC 3533</t>
 				<t>Applications which use this media type: Scientific and other applications which require various multiplexed signals or streams of data.</t>
 				<t>Additional information:</t>
 				<t>Magic number(s): The first four bytes, 0x4f 0x67 0x67 0x53, correspond to the string "OggS".</t>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
 				<t>Encoding considerations: See section 5.</t>
 				<t>Security considerations: See section 6.</t>
 				<t>Interoperability considerations: None, as noted in section 7.</t>
-				<t>Published specification: <xref target="RFC3533"/></t>
+				<t>Published specification: RFC 3533</t>
 				<t>Applications which use this media type: Multimedia applications, including hardware-based, streaming, and conferencing tools.</t>
 				<t>Additional information:</t>
 				<t>Magic number(s): The first four bytes, 0x4f 0x67 0x67 0x53, correspond to the string "OggS".</t>
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
 				<t>Encoding considerations: See section 5.</t>
 				<t>Security considerations: See section 6.</t>
 				<t>Interoperability considerations: None, as noted in section 7.</t>
-				<t>Published specification: <xref target="RFC3533"/></t>
+				<t>Published specification: RFC 3533</t>
 				<t>Applications which use this media type: Multimedia applications, including hardware-based, streaming, and conferencing tools.</t>
 				<t>Additional information:</t>
 				<t>Magic number(s): The first four bytes, 0x4f 0x67 0x67 0x53, correspond to the string "OggS".</t>
@@ -183,16 +183,6 @@
 				</front>
 				<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3533"/>
 			</reference>
-			<reference anchor="RFC3534">
-				<front>
-					<title>The application/ogg Media Type</title>
-					<author initials="L." surname="Walleij" fullname="Linus Walleij">
-						<organization abbrev="Xiph">Xiph.Org Foundation</organization>
-					</author>
-					<date month="May" year="2003"/>
-				</front>
-				<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3534"/>
-			</reference>
 			<reference anchor="RFC2045">
 				<front>
 					<title>Multipurpose Internet Mail Extensions (MIME) Part One: Format of Internet Message Bodies</title>
@@ -216,6 +206,18 @@
 				<seriesInfo name="BCP" value="14"/>
 				<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2119"/>
 			</reference>
+			<reference anchor="RFC4288">
+				<front>
+					<title>Media Type Specifications and Registration Procedures</title>
+					<author initials="N." surname="Freed" fullname="Ned Freed">
+						<organization>Sun Microsystems</organization>
+					</author>John C. Klensin
+					<author initials="J." surname="Klensin" fullname="John C. Klensin"/>
+					<date month="December" year="2005"/>
+				</front>
+				<seriesInfo name="BCP" value="13"/>
+				<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="4288"/>
+			</reference>
 		</references>
 		<references title="Informative References">
 			<reference anchor="Ogg" target="http://xiph.org/ogg/doc">
@@ -226,6 +228,16 @@
 					</author>
 				</front>
 			</reference>
+			<reference anchor="RFC3534">
+				<front>
+					<title>The application/ogg Media Type</title>
+					<author initials="L." surname="Walleij" fullname="Linus Walleij">
+						<organization abbrev="Xiph">Xiph.Org Foundation</organization>
+					</author>
+					<date month="May" year="2003"/>
+				</front>
+				<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3534"/>
+			</reference>
 			<reference anchor="Theora" target="http://theora.org/doc/Theora_spec.pdf">
 				<front>
 					<title>Theora Specification</title>



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