[xiph-commits] r14217 - trunk/vorbis/doc

[lu_zero at svn.xiph.org]

Author: lu_zero
Date: 2007-11-22 17:02:47 -0800 (Thu, 22 Nov 2007)
New Revision: 14217

Modified:
   trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-08.xml
Log:
There is just an example (addressing part of the Hannes Tschofenig comments)

Modified: trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-08.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-08.xml	2007-11-22 15:08:00 UTC (rev 14216)
+++ trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-08.xml	2007-11-23 01:02:47 UTC (rev 14217)
@@ -1134,12 +1134,12 @@
 
 </section>
 
-<section anchor="Examples" title="Examples">
+<section anchor="Example" title="Example">
 
 <t>
-The following examples are common usage patterns that MAY be applied in such
-situations, the main scope of this section is to explain better usage of the
-transmission vectors.
+The following example shows a common usage pattern that MAY be applied in
+such situation, the main scope of this section is to explain better usage
+of the transmission vectors.
 </t>
 
 <section anchor="Stream Radio" title="Stream Radio">
@@ -1162,7 +1162,7 @@
 the SDP updated. Since the in-band method is unreliable, an out of band
 fallback is provided.</t>
 
-<t>The client MAY choose to fetch the Configuration from the alternate source
+<t>The client may choose to fetch the Configuration from the alternate source
 as soon as it discovers a Configuration packet got lost in-band or use
 <xref target="RFC3611">selective retransmission</xref>, if the server supports
 the feature.</t>