[xiph-commits] r12995 - trunk/vorbis/doc

[lu_zero at svn.xiph.org]

Author: lu_zero
Date: 2007-05-29 01:24:22 -0700 (Tue, 29 May 2007)
New Revision: 12995

Modified:
   trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.txt
   trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.xml
Log:
Latest batch of fixes

Modified: trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.txt	2007-05-28 08:47:18 UTC (rev 12994)
+++ trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.txt	2007-05-29 08:24:22 UTC (rev 12995)
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
    6.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17
      6.1.  Packed Headers IANA Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . 19
    7.  SDP related considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
-     7.1.  Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
+     7.1.  Mapping Media Type Parameters into SDP . . . . . . . . . . 20
        7.1.1.  SDP Example  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
      7.2.  Usage with the SDP Offer/Answer Model  . . . . . . . . . . 21
    8.  Congestion Control . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
@@ -1086,7 +1086,7 @@
    described in the IANA considerations section and their usage in the
    Offer/Answer Model [7].
 
-7.1.  Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP
+7.1.  Mapping Media Type Parameters into SDP
 
    The information carried in the Media Type media type specification
    has a specific mapping to fields in the Session Description Protocol
@@ -1148,13 +1148,13 @@
       resource/aggregate.bz2!8b6237eb5154a0ea12811a94e8e2697b3312bc6c;
 
    Note that the payload format (encoding) names are commonly shown in
-   upper case.  MIME subtypes are commonly shown in lower case.  These
-   names are case-insensitive in both places.  Similarly, parameter
-   names are case-insensitive both in MIME types and in the default
-   mapping to the SDP a=fmtp attribute.  The exception regarding case
-   sensitivity is the configuration-uri URI which MUST be regarded as
-   being case sensitive.  The a=fmtp line is a single line even if it is
-   presented broken because of clarity.
+   upper case.  Media Type subtypes are commonly shown in lower case.
+   These names are case-insensitive in both places.  Similarly,
+   parameter names are case-insensitive both in Media Type types and in
+   the default mapping to the SDP a=fmtp attribute.  The exception
+   regarding case sensitivity is the configuration-uri URI which MUST be
+   regarded as being case sensitive.  The a=fmtp line is a single line
+   even if it is presented broken because of clarity.
 
 7.2.  Usage with the SDP Offer/Answer Model
 
@@ -1249,8 +1249,8 @@
 11.  Acknowledgments
 
    This document is a continuation of draft-moffitt-vorbis-rtp-00.txt
-   and draft-kerr-avt-vorbis-rtp-04.txt.  The MIME type section is a
-   continuation of draft-short-avt-rtp-vorbis-mime-00.txt.
+   and draft-kerr-avt-vorbis-rtp-04.txt.  The Media Type type section is
+   a continuation of draft-short-avt-rtp-vorbis-mime-00.txt.
 
    Thanks to the AVT, Ogg Vorbis Communities / Xiph.org including Steve
    Casner, Aaron Colwell, Ross Finlayson, Fluendo, Ramon Garcia, Pascal

Modified: trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.xml	2007-05-28 08:47:18 UTC (rev 12994)
+++ trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-04.xml	2007-05-29 08:24:22 UTC (rev 12995)
@@ -1028,7 +1028,7 @@
 The following paragraphs defines the mapping of the parameters described in the IANA considerations section and their usage in the <xref target="rfc3264">Offer/Answer Model</xref>.
 </t>
 
-<section anchor="Mapping Media Type Parameters into SDP" title="Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP"> 
+<section anchor="Mapping Media Type Parameters into SDP" title="Mapping Media Type Parameters into SDP"> 
 
 <t>
 The information carried in the Media Type media type specification has a
@@ -1056,7 +1056,7 @@
 included in the SDP "a=fmtp" attribute.</t>
 <vspace blankLines="1" />
 
-<t>The optional parameter "configuration-uri", when present,  MUST be included
+<t>The optional parameter "configuration-uri", when present, MUST be included
 in the SDP "a=fmtp" attribute and MUST follow the delivery-method that applies.</t>
 
 </list>
@@ -1099,9 +1099,9 @@
 
 <t>
 Note that the payload format (encoding) names are commonly shown in upper case.
-MIME subtypes are commonly shown in lower case. These names are
+Media Type subtypes are commonly shown in lower case. These names are
 case-insensitive in both places.  Similarly, parameter names are
-case-insensitive both in MIME types and in the default mapping to the SDP
+case-insensitive both in Media Type types and in the default mapping to the SDP
 a=fmtp attribute. The exception regarding case sensitivity is the
 configuration-uri URI which MUST be regarded as being case sensitive. The
 a=fmtp line is a single line even if it is presented broken because of clarity.
@@ -1198,8 +1198,8 @@
 
 <t>
 This document is a continuation of draft-moffitt-vorbis-rtp-00.txt and
-draft-kerr-avt-vorbis-rtp-04.txt.  The MIME type section is a continuation of
-draft-short-avt-rtp-vorbis-mime-00.txt.
+draft-kerr-avt-vorbis-rtp-04.txt.  The Media Type type section is a
+continuation of draft-short-avt-rtp-vorbis-mime-00.txt.
 </t>
 
 <t>