[xiph-commits] r12883 - trunk/vorbis/doc

lu_zero at svn.xiph.org lu_zero at svn.xiph.org
Tue Apr 17 08:13:34 PDT 2007


Author: lu_zero
Date: 2007-04-17 08:13:33 -0700 (Tue, 17 Apr 2007)
New Revision: 12883

Modified:
   trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.txt
   trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.xml
Log:
idnits fixes

Modified: trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.txt	2007-04-17 05:52:06 UTC (rev 12882)
+++ trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.txt	2007-04-17 15:13:33 UTC (rev 12883)
@@ -40,23 +40,29 @@
 
 Abstract
 
+
+1.  Intended Status (To Be Removed Upon Publication)
+
+   The intended status of this document is Proposed Standard.
+
    This document describes an RTP payload format for transporting Vorbis
    encoded audio.  It details the RTP encapsulation mechanism for raw
    Vorbis data and details the delivery mechanisms for the decoder
    probability model, referred to as a codebook and other setup
-   information.
 
-   Also included within this memo are media type registrations, and the
-   details necessary for the use of Vorbis with the Session Description
-   Protocol (SDP).
 
 
-
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+   information.
+
+   Also included within this memo are media type registrations, and the
+   details necessary for the use of Vorbis with the Session Description
+   Protocol (SDP).
+
 Editors Note
 
    All references to RFC XXXX are to be replaced by references to the
@@ -65,55 +71,49 @@
 
 Table of Contents
 
-   1.  Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
-     1.1.  Terminology  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
-   2.  Payload Format . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
-     2.1.  RTP Header . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
-     2.2.  Payload Header . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
-     2.3.  Payload Data . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  6
-     2.4.  Example RTP Packet . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
-   3.  Configuration Headers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  8
-     3.1.  In-band Header Transmission  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
-       3.1.1.  Packed Configuration . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
-     3.2.  Out of Band Transmission . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
-       3.2.1.  Packed Headers . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
-     3.3.  Loss of Configuration Headers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
-   4.  Comment Headers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
-   5.  Frame Packetization  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14
-     5.1.  Example Fragmented Vorbis Packet . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15
-     5.2.  Packet Loss  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17
-   6.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18
-   7.  SDP related considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
-     7.1.  Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
-       7.1.1.  SDP Example  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
-     7.2.  Usage with the SDP Offer/Answer Model  . . . . . . . . . . 21
-   8.  Congestion Control . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
-   9.  Examples . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
-     9.1.  Stream Radio . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
-   10. Security Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
-   11. Acknowledgments  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
-   12. References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23
-     12.1. Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23
-     12.2. Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 24
+   1.  Intended Status (To Be Removed Upon Publication) . . . . . . .  1
+   2.  Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
+     2.1.  Terminology  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
+   3.  Payload Format . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
+     3.1.  RTP Header . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  3
+     3.2.  Payload Header . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
+     3.3.  Payload Data . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  6
+     3.4.  Example RTP Packet . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
+   4.  Configuration Headers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  8
+     4.1.  In-band Header Transmission  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
+       4.1.1.  Packed Configuration . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
+     4.2.  Out of Band Transmission . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
+       4.2.1.  Packed Headers . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
+     4.3.  Loss of Configuration Headers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
+   5.  Comment Headers  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
+   6.  Frame Packetization  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14
+     6.1.  Example Fragmented Vorbis Packet . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15
+     6.2.  Packet Loss  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17
+   7.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18
+   8.  SDP related considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
+     8.1.  Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
+       8.1.1.  SDP Example  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20
+     8.2.  Usage with the SDP Offer/Answer Model  . . . . . . . . . . 21
+   9.  Congestion Control . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
+   10. Examples . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21
+     10.1. Stream Radio . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
+   11. Security Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
+   12. Acknowledgments  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22
+   13. References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23
+     13.1. Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23
+     13.2. Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 24
    Author's Address . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 24
    Intellectual Property and Copyright Statements . . . . . . . . . . 25
 
 
 
 
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-1.  Introduction
+2.  Introduction
 
    Vorbis is a general purpose perceptual audio codec intended to allow
    maximum encoder flexibility, thus allowing it to scale competitively
@@ -125,18 +125,18 @@
    quadraphonic, 5.1, ambisonic, or up to 255 discrete channels).
 
    Vorbis encoded audio is generally encapsulated within an Ogg format
-   bitstream [1], which provides framing and synchronization.  For the
+   bitstream [11], which provides framing and synchronization.  For the
    purposes of RTP transport, this layer is unnecessary, and so raw
    Vorbis packets are used in the payload.
 
-1.1.  Terminology
+2.1.  Terminology
 
    The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
    "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
-   document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [2].
+   document are to be interpreted as described in RFC 2119 [1].
 
 
-2.  Payload Format
+3.  Payload Format
 
    For RTP based transport of Vorbis encoded audio the standard RTP
    header is followed by a 4 octets payload header, then the payload
@@ -147,9 +147,9 @@
    bitstream information.  There are 3 types of Vorbis payload data, an
    RTP packet MUST contain just one of them at time.
 
-2.1.  RTP Header
+3.1.  RTP Header
 
-   The format of the RTP header is specified in [3] and shown in Figure
+   The format of the RTP header is specified in [2] and shown in Figure
    Figure 1.  This payload format uses the fields of the header in a
    manner consistent with that specification.
 
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
                            Figure 1: RTP Header
 
    The RTP header begins with an octet of fields (V, P, X, and CC) to
-   support specialized RTP uses (see [3] and [4] for details).  For
+   support specialized RTP uses (see [2] and [3] for details).  For
    Vorbis RTP, the following values are used.
 
    Version (V): 2 bits
@@ -196,20 +196,20 @@
    Padding (P): 1 bit
 
    Padding MAY be used with this payload format according to section 5.1
-   of [3].
+   of [2].
 
    Extension (X): 1 bit
 
-   The Extension bit is used in accordance with [3].
+   The Extension bit is used in accordance with [2].
 
    CSRC count (CC): 4 bits
 
-   The CSRC count is used in accordance with [3].
+   The CSRC count is used in accordance with [2].
 
    Marker (M): 1 bit
 
    Set to zero.  Audio silence suppression not used.  This conforms to
-   section 4.1 of [14].
+   section 4.1 of [13].
 
    Payload Type (PT): 7 bits
 
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@
 
    The sequence number increments by one for each RTP data packet sent,
    and may be used by the receiver to detect packet loss and to restore
-   packet sequence.  This field is detailed further in [3].
+   packet sequence.  This field is detailed further in [2].
 
    Timestamp: 32 bits
 
@@ -241,9 +241,9 @@
    SSRC/CSRC identifiers:
 
    These two fields, 32 bits each with one SSRC field and a maximum of
-   16 CSRC fields, are as defined in [3].
+   16 CSRC fields, are as defined in [2].
 
-2.2.  Payload Header
+3.2.  Payload Header
 
    The 4 octets following the RTP Header section are the Payload Header.
    This header is split into a number of bitfields detailing the format
@@ -298,12 +298,12 @@
    the payload.  If the packet contains fragmented data the number of
    packets MUST be set to 0.
 
-2.3.  Payload Data
+3.3.  Payload Data
 
    Raw Vorbis packets are currently unbounded in length, application
    profiles will likely define a practical limit.  Typical Vorbis packet
    sizes range from very small (2-3 bytes) to quite large (8-12
-   kilobytes).  The reference implementation [13] typically produces
+   kilobytes).  The reference implementation [12] typically produces
    packets less than ~800 bytes, except for the setup header packets
    which are ~4-12 kilobytes.  Within an RTP context, to avoid
    fragmentation, the Vorbis data packet size SHOULD be kept
@@ -338,14 +338,14 @@
 
 
    The payload packing of the Vorbis data packets MUST follow the
-   guidelines set-out in [4] where the oldest packet occurs immediately
+   guidelines set-out in [3] where the oldest packet occurs immediately
    after the RTP packet header.  Subsequent packets, if any, MUST follow
    in temporal order.
 
    Channel mapping of the audio is in accordance with the Vorbis I
-   Specification [14].
+   Specification [13].
 
-2.4.  Example RTP Packet
+3.4.  Example RTP Packet
 
    Here is an example RTP packet containing two Vorbis packets.
 
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@
    decode the packets is the one indexed by the ident value.
 
 
-3.  Configuration Headers
+4.  Configuration Headers
 
    Unlike other mainstream audio codecs Vorbis has no statically
    configured probability model.  Instead, it packs all entropy decoding
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@
    compressed data stream.  These two blocks of information are often
    referred to collectively as the "codebooks" for a Vorbis stream, and
    are nominally included as special "header" packets at the start of
-   the compressed data.  In addition, the Vorbis I specification [14]
+   the compressed data.  In addition, the Vorbis I specification [13]
    requires the presence of a comment header packet which gives simple
    metadata about the stream, but this information is not required for
    decoding the frame sequence.
@@ -430,13 +430,13 @@
 
    The delivery vectors in use are specified by an SDP attribute to
    indicate the method and the optional URI where the Vorbis Packed
-   Configuration (Section 3.1.1) Packets could be fetched.  Different
+   Configuration (Section 4.1.1) Packets could be fetched.  Different
    delivery methods MAY be advertised for the same session.  The in-band
    Configuration delivery SHOULD be considered as baseline, out-of-band
    delivery methods that don't use RTP will not be described in this
    document.  For non chained streams, the Configuration recommended
-   delivery method is inline the Packed Configuration (Section 3.1.1) in
-   the SDP as explained in the IANA considerations (Section 7.1)
+   delivery method is inline the Packed Configuration (Section 4.1.1) in
+   the SDP as explained in the IANA considerations (Section 8.1)
    section.
 
    The 24 bit Ident field is used to map which Configuration will be
@@ -455,18 +455,18 @@
    information it MUST NOT decode the raw Vorbis data associated until
    it fetches the correct Configuration.
 
-3.1.  In-band Header Transmission
+4.1.  In-band Header Transmission
 
-   The Packed Configuration (Section 3.1.1) Payload is sent in-band with
+   The Packed Configuration (Section 4.1.1) Payload is sent in-band with
    the packet type bits set to match the Vorbis Data Type.  Clients MUST
    be capable of dealing with fragmentation and periodic re-transmission
    of the configuration headers.
 
-3.1.1.  Packed Configuration
+4.1.1.  Packed Configuration
 
    A Vorbis Packed Configuration is indicated with the Vorbis Data Type
    field set to 1.  Of the three headers, defined in the Vorbis I
-   specification [14], the identification and the setup will be packed
+   specification [13], the identification and the setup will be packed
    together, the comment header is completely suppressed.  Is up to the
    client to provide a minimal size comment header to the decoder if
    required by the implementation.
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@
    set to 0 since the packet bears the full Packed configuration, the
    number of packet is set to 1.
 
-3.2.  Out of Band Transmission
+4.2.  Out of Band Transmission
 
    This section, as stated above, does not cover all the possible out-
    of-band delivery methods since they rely on different protocols and
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@
 Internet-Draft        draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02            April 2007
 
 
-3.2.1.  Packed Headers
+4.2.1.  Packed Headers
 
    As mentioned above the RECOMMENDED delivery vector for Vorbis
    configuration data is via a retrieval method that can be performed
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@
 Internet-Draft        draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02            April 2007
 
 
-3.2.1.1.  Packed Headers IANA Considerations
+4.2.1.1.  Packed Headers IANA Considerations
 
    The following IANA considerations MUST only be applied to the packed
    headers.
@@ -687,7 +687,7 @@
 
       IETF AVT Working Group
 
-3.3.  Loss of Configuration Headers
+4.3.  Loss of Configuration Headers
 
    Unlike the loss of raw Vorbis payload data, loss of a configuration
    header can lead to a situation where it will not be possible to
@@ -697,14 +697,14 @@
    decoding.
 
 
-4.  Comment Headers
+5.  Comment Headers
 
    With the Vorbis Data Type flag set to 2, this indicates that the
    packet contain the comment metadata, such as artist name, track title
    and so on.  These metadata messages are not intended to be fully
    descriptive but to offer basic track/song information.  Clients MAY
    ignore it completely.  The details on the format of the comments can
-   be found in the Vorbis documentation [14].
+   be found in the Vorbis documentation [13].
 
 
 
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@
    fragmented.
 
 
-5.  Frame Packetization
+6.  Frame Packetization
 
    Each RTP packet contains either one Vorbis packet fragment, or an
    integer number of complete Vorbis packets (up to a maximum of 15
@@ -767,7 +767,7 @@
    in the RTP packet with as many Vorbis packets as will fit, up to a
    maximum of 15, except when such bundling would exceed an
    application's desired transmission latency.  Path MTU is detailed in
-   [6] and [7].
+   [5] and [6].
 
    A fragmented packet has a zero in the last four bits of the payload
    header.  The first fragment will set the Fragment type to 1.  Each
@@ -787,7 +787,7 @@
 
    packets.  The length field shows the fragment length.
 
-5.1.  Example Fragmented Vorbis Packet
+6.1.  Example Fragmented Vorbis Packet
 
    Here is an example fragmented Vorbis packet split over three RTP
    packets.  Each packet contains the standard RTP headers as well as
@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@
    the timestamp remains set to the first packet in the sequence and the
    sequence number has been incremented.
 
-5.2.  Packet Loss
+6.2.  Packet Loss
 
    As there is no error correction within the Vorbis stream, packet loss
    will result in a loss of signal.  Packet loss is more of an issue for
@@ -943,7 +943,7 @@
 
    Loss of any of the Configuration fragment will result in the loss of
    the full Configuration packet with the result detailed in the Loss of
-   Configuration Headers (Section 3.3) section.
+   Configuration Headers (Section 4.3) section.
 
 
 
@@ -953,7 +953,7 @@
 Internet-Draft        draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02            April 2007
 
 
-6.  IANA Considerations
+7.  IANA Considerations
 
    MIME media type name:  audio
 
@@ -963,19 +963,19 @@
 
       rate:  indicates the RTP timestamp clock rate as described in RTP
          Profile for Audio and Video Conferences with Minimal Control.
-         [4]
+         [3]
 
       channels:  indicates the number of audio channels as described in
          RTP Profile for Audio and Video Conferences with Minimal
-         Control. [4]
+         Control. [3]
 
       delivery-method:  indicates the delivery methods in use, the
          possible values are: inline, in_band, out_band/specific_name
          Where "specific_name" is the name of the out of band delivery
          method.
 
-      configuration:  the base64 [9] representation of the Packed
-         Headers (Section 3.2.1).
+      configuration:  the base64 [8] representation of the Packed
+         Headers (Section 4.2.1).
 
    Optional Parameters:
 
@@ -985,10 +985,10 @@
          method, a single configuration packet could be retrived by its
          number, or multiple packets could be aggregated in a single
          stream.  Such aggregates MAY be compressed using either bzip2
-         [12] or gzip [10].  A sha1 [11] checksum MAY be provided for
+         [10] or gzip [14].  A sha1 [9] checksum MAY be provided for
          aggregates.  In this latter case the URI will end with the
          aggregate name, followed by its compressed extension if
-         applies, a "!" and the base64 [9] representation of the
+         applies, a "!" and the base64 [8] representation of the
          sha1hash of the above mentioned compressed aggregated as in:
          "protocol://path/to/resource/aggregated.bz2!sha1hash".  The
          trailing '/' discriminates which of two methods are in use.
@@ -1045,7 +1045,7 @@
    Restriction on usage:
 
       This media type depends on RTP framing, and hence is only defined
-      for transfer via RTP [3]
+      for transfer via RTP [2]
 
    Author:
 
@@ -1065,17 +1065,17 @@
 Internet-Draft        draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02            April 2007
 
 
-7.  SDP related considerations
+8.  SDP related considerations
 
    The following paragraphs defines the mapping of the parameters
    described in the IANA considerations section and their usage in the
-   Offer/Answer Model [8].
+   Offer/Answer Model [7].
 
-7.1.  Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP
+8.1.  Mapping MIME Parameters into SDP
 
    The information carried in the MIME media type specification has a
    specific mapping to fields in the Session Description Protocol (SDP)
-   [5], which is commonly used to describe RTP sessions.  When SDP is
+   [4], which is commonly used to describe RTP sessions.  When SDP is
    used to specify sessions the mapping are as follows:
 
    o  The MIME type ("audio") goes in SDP "m=" as the media name.
@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@
    specified in the rtpmap attribute MUST match the Vorbis sample rate
    value.  An example is found below.
 
-7.1.1.  SDP Example
+8.1.1.  SDP Example
 
    The following example shows a basic SDP single stream.  The first
    configuration packet is inlined in the sdp, other configurations
@@ -1121,9 +1121,9 @@
 Internet-Draft        draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02            April 2007
 
 
-   The inline base64 [9] configuration string is omitted because of the
+   The inline base64 [8] configuration string is omitted because of the
    lenght.
-      c=IN IP4 192.0.0.1
+      c=IN IP4 192.0.2.1
       m=audio RTP/AVP 98
       a=rtpmap:98 vorbis/44100/2
       a=fmtp:98 delivery-method=in_band; configuration=base64string;
@@ -1141,16 +1141,16 @@
    being case sensitive.  The a=fmtp line is a single line even if it is
    presented broken because of clarity.
 
-7.2.  Usage with the SDP Offer/Answer Model
+8.2.  Usage with the SDP Offer/Answer Model
 
    The offer, as described in An Offer/Answer Model Session Description
-   Protocol [8], may contain a large number of delivery methods per
+   Protocol [7], may contain a large number of delivery methods per
    single fmtp attribute, the answerer MUST remove every delivery-method
    and configuration-uri not supported.  All the parameters MUST not be
    altered on answer otherwise.
 
 
-8.  Congestion Control
+9.  Congestion Control
 
    Vorbis clients SHOULD send regular receiver reports detailing
    congestion.  A mechanism for dynamically downgrading the stream,
@@ -1160,7 +1160,7 @@
    if one is available.
 
 
-9.  Examples
+10.  Examples
 
    The following examples are common usage patterns that MAY be applied
    in such situations, the main scope of this section is to explain
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@
 Internet-Draft        draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02            April 2007
 
 
-9.1.  Stream Radio
+10.1.  Stream Radio
 
    This is one of the most common situation: one single server streaming
    content in multicast, the clients may start a session at random time.
@@ -1211,10 +1211,10 @@
    already known.
 
 
-10.  Security Considerations
+11.  Security Considerations
 
    RTP packets using this payload format are subject to the security
-   considerations discussed in the RTP specification [3].  This implies
+   considerations discussed in the RTP specification [2].  This implies
    that the confidentiality of the media stream is achieved by using
    encryption.  Because the data compression used with this payload
    format is applied end-to-end, encryption may be performed on the
@@ -1222,7 +1222,7 @@
    taken to prevent buffer overflows in the client applications.
 
 
-11.  Acknowledgments
+12.  Acknowledgments
 
    This document is a continuation of draft-moffitt-vorbis-rtp-00.txt
 
@@ -1246,61 +1246,63 @@
    Ridolfo, Francesco Varano, Giampaolo Mancini, Juan Carlos De Martin.
 
 
-12.  References
+13.  References
 
-12.1.  Normative References
+13.1.  Normative References
 
-   [1]   Pfeiffer, S., "The Ogg Encapsulation Format Version 0",
-         RFC 3533.
-
-   [2]   Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement
+   [1]   Bradner, S., "Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement
          Levels", RFC 2119.
 
-   [3]   Schulzrinne, H., Casner, S., Frederick, R., and V. Jacobson,
+   [2]   Schulzrinne, H., Casner, S., Frederick, R., and V. Jacobson,
          "RTP: A Transport Protocol for real-time applications",
          RFC 3550.
 
-   [4]   Schulzrinne, H. and S. Casner, "RTP Profile for Audio and Video
+   [3]   Schulzrinne, H. and S. Casner, "RTP Profile for Audio and Video
          Conferences with Minimal Control.", RFC 3551.
 
-   [5]   Handley, M. and V. Jacobson, "SDP: Session Description
-         Protocol", RFC 2327.
+   [4]   Handley, M., Jacobson, V., and C. Perkins, "SDP: Session
+         Description Protocol", RFC 4566, July 2006.
 
-   [6]   Mogul et al., J., "Path MTU Discovery", RFC 1063.
+   [5]   Mogul, J. and S. Deering, "Path MTU discovery", RFC 1191,
+         November 1990.
 
-   [7]   McCann et al., J., "Path MTU Discovery for IP version 6",
+   [6]   McCann et al., J., "Path MTU Discovery for IP version 6",
          RFC 1981.
 
-   [8]   Rosenberg, J. and H. Schulzrinne, "An Offer/Answer Model with
+   [7]   Rosenberg, J. and H. Schulzrinne, "An Offer/Answer Model with
          Session Description Protocol (SDP)", RFC 3264.
 
-   [9]   Josefsson, S., "The Base16, Base32, and Base64 Data Encodings",
+   [8]   Josefsson, S., "The Base16, Base32, and Base64 Data Encodings",
          RFC 3548.
 
-   [10]  Deutsch, P., "GZIP file format specification version 4.3",
-         RFC 1952.
+   [9]   National Institute of Standards and Technology, "Secure Hash
+         Standard", May 1993.
 
-   [11]  National Institute of Standards and Technology, "Secure Hash
+   [10]  Seward, J., "libbz2 and bzip2".
 
 
 
+
+
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-         Standard", May 1993.
+13.2.  Informative References
 
-   [12]  Seward, J., "libbz2 and bzip2".
+   [11]  Pfeiffer, S., "The Ogg Encapsulation Format Version 0",
+         RFC 3533.
 
-12.2.  Informative References
-
-   [13]  "libvorbis: Available from the Xiph website,
+   [12]  "libvorbis: Available from the Xiph website,
          http://www.xiph.org".
 
-   [14]  "Ogg Vorbis I specification:  Codec setup and packet decode.
+   [13]  "Ogg Vorbis I specification:  Codec setup and packet decode.
          Available from the Xiph website, http://www.xiph.org".
 
+   [14]  Deutsch, P., "GZIP file format specification version 4.3",
+         RFC 1952.
+
    [15]  Friedman, T., Caceres, R., and A. Clark, "RTP Control Protocol
          Extended Reports (RTCP XR)", RFC 3611, November 2003.
 
@@ -1338,8 +1340,6 @@
 
 
 
-
-
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Modified: trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.xml	2007-04-17 05:52:06 UTC (rev 12882)
+++ trunk/vorbis/doc/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-vorbis-02.xml	2007-04-17 15:13:33 UTC (rev 12883)
@@ -27,6 +27,11 @@
 <keyword>RTP</keyword>
 
 <abstract>
+
+<section title="Intended Status (To Be Removed Upon Publication)">
+<t>The intended status of this document is Proposed Standard.</t>
+</section>
+
 <t>
 This document describes an RTP payload format for transporting Vorbis encoded
 audio. It details the RTP encapsulation mechanism for raw Vorbis data and 
@@ -734,7 +739,7 @@
 Any Vorbis data packet that is less than path MTU SHOULD be bundled in the RTP
 packet with as many Vorbis packets as will fit, up to a maximum of 15, except
 when such bundling would exceed an application's desired transmission latency.
-Path MTU is detailed in <xref target="rfc1063"></xref> and <xref target="rfc1981"></xref>.
+Path MTU is detailed in <xref target="rfc1191"></xref> and <xref target="rfc1981"></xref>.
 </t>
 
 <t>
@@ -1024,7 +1029,7 @@
 
 <t>
 The information carried in the MIME media type specification has a specific
-mapping to fields in the Session Description Protocol (SDP) <xref target="rfc2327"></xref>, which is commonly used to describe RTP sessions.  When SDP is used
+mapping to fields in the <xref target="rfc4566">Session Description Protocol (SDP)</xref>, which is commonly used to describe RTP sessions.  When SDP is used
 to specify sessions the mapping are as follows:
 </t>
 
@@ -1080,7 +1085,7 @@
 the lenght.</t>
 
 <list style="empty">
-<t>c=IN IP4 192.0.0.1</t>
+<t>c=IN IP4 192.0.2.1</t>
 <t>m=audio  RTP/AVP 98</t>
 <t>a=rtpmap:98 vorbis/44100/2</t>
 <t>a=fmtp:98 delivery-method=in_band; configuration=base64string; delivery-method=out_band/rtsp; configuration-uri=rtsp://path/to/the/resource; delivery-method=out_band/http; configuration-uri=http://another/path/to/resource/aggregate.bz2!8b6237eb5154a0ea12811a94e8e2697b3312bc6c;</t>
@@ -1208,14 +1213,6 @@
 
 <references title="Normative References">
 
-<reference anchor="rfc3533">
-<front>
-<title>The Ogg Encapsulation Format Version 0</title>
-<author initials="S." surname="Pfeiffer" fullname="Silvia Pfeiffer"></author>
-</front>
-<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3533" />
-</reference>
-
 <reference anchor="rfc2119">
 <front>
 <title>Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels </title>
@@ -1244,24 +1241,43 @@
 <date month="July" year="2003" />
 <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3551" />
 </reference> 
-  
-<reference anchor="rfc2327">
+
+<reference anchor='rfc4566'>
+
 <front>
 <title>SDP: Session Description Protocol</title>
-<author initials="M." surname="Handley" fullname="Mark Handley"></author>
-<author initials="V." surname="Jacobson" fullname="Van Jacobson"></author>
+<author initials='M.' surname='Handley' fullname='M. Handley'>
+<organization /></author>
+<author initials='V.' surname='Jacobson' fullname='V. Jacobson'>
+<organization /></author>
+<author initials='C.' surname='Perkins' fullname='C. Perkins'>
+<organization /></author>
+<date year='2006' month='July' />
 </front>
-<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2327" />
-</reference>   
 
-<reference anchor="rfc1063">
+<seriesInfo name='RFC' value='4566' />
+<format type='TXT' octets='108820' target='ftp://ftp.isi.edu/in-notes/rfc4566.txt' />
+</reference>
+
+<reference anchor='rfc1191'>
+
 <front>
-<title>Path MTU Discovery</title>
-<author initials="J." surname="Mogul et al." fullname="J. Mogul et al."></author>
+<title>Path MTU discovery</title>
+<author initials='J.' surname='Mogul' fullname='Jeffrey Mogul'>
+<organization>Digital Equipment Corporation (DEC) , Western Research Laboratory</organization>
+<address>
+<email>mogul at decwrl.dec.com</email></address></author>
+<author initials='S.' surname='Deering' fullname='Steve Deering'>
+<organization>Xerox Palo Alto Research Center</organization>
+<address>
+<email>deering at xerox.com</email></address></author>
+<date year='1990' day='1' month='November' />
 </front>
-<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="1063" />
-</reference>   
 
+<seriesInfo name='RFC' value='1191' />
+<format type='TXT' octets='47936' target='ftp://ftp.isi.edu/in-notes/rfc1191.txt' />
+</reference>
+
 <reference anchor="rfc1981">
 <front>
 <title>Path MTU Discovery for IP version 6</title>
@@ -1285,16 +1301,7 @@
 <author initials="S." surname="Josefsson" fullname="Simon Josefsson"></author>
 </front>
 <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3548" />
-</reference>   
-
-<reference anchor="rfc1952">
-<front>
-<title>GZIP file format specification version 4.3</title>
-<author initials="P" surname="Deutsch" fullname="L. Peter Deutsch"></author>
-</front>
-<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="1952" />
 </reference>
-
 <reference anchor="FIPS180">
 <front>
 <title>Secure Hash Standard</title>
@@ -1304,18 +1311,18 @@
 <date month="May" year="1993"/>
 </front>
 </reference>
+</references>
 
-<reference anchor="BZ2">
+<references title="Informative References">
+
+<reference anchor="rfc3533">
 <front>
-<title>libbz2 and bzip2</title>
-<author initials="J" surname="Seward" fullname="Julian Seward" />
+<title>The Ogg Encapsulation Format Version 0</title>
+<author initials="S." surname="Pfeiffer" fullname="Silvia Pfeiffer"></author>
 </front>
+<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3533" />
 </reference>
 
-
-</references>
-
-<references title="Informative References">
 <reference anchor="libvorbis">
 <front>
 <title>libvorbis: Available from the Xiph website, http://www.xiph.org</title>
@@ -1328,6 +1335,14 @@
 </front>
 </reference>   
 
+<reference anchor="rfc1952">
+<front>
+<title>GZIP file format specification version 4.3</title>
+<author initials="P" surname="Deutsch" fullname="L. Peter Deutsch"></author>
+</front>
+<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="1952" />
+</reference>
+
 <reference anchor="RFC3611">
 <front>
 <title>RTP Control Protocol Extended Reports (RTCP XR)</title>
@@ -1338,6 +1353,13 @@
 </front>
 <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3611"/>
 </reference>
+<reference anchor="BZ2">
+<front>
+
+<title>libbz2 and bzip2</title>
+<author initials="J" surname="Seward" fullname="Julian Seward" />
+</front>
+</reference>
 </references>
 </back>
 </rfc>



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