[xiph-commits] r10446 - websites/xiph.org/quicktime

giles at svn.xiph.org giles at svn.xiph.org
Fri Nov 25 12:03:49 PST 2005


Author: giles
Date: 2005-11-25 12:03:48 -0800 (Fri, 25 Nov 2005)
New Revision: 10446

Modified:
   websites/xiph.org/quicktime/about.html
   websites/xiph.org/quicktime/bugreport.html
   websites/xiph.org/quicktime/contact.html
   websites/xiph.org/quicktime/development.html
   websites/xiph.org/quicktime/index.html
Log:
Minor English fixes.


Modified: websites/xiph.org/quicktime/about.html
===================================================================
--- websites/xiph.org/quicktime/about.html	2005-11-25 19:34:48 UTC (rev 10445)
+++ websites/xiph.org/quicktime/about.html	2005-11-25 20:03:48 UTC (rev 10446)
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
           <p>If you are a programmer, you have built a Macintosh
             <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CoreAudio" class="wikipedia">Core Audio</a>
             or QuickTime-based application and would like to add Xiph formats support: most of
-            the time there is hardly anything you will need to do to add the support.</p>
+            the time there is hardly anything you will need to do to add support.</p>
           <h3>License</h3>
           <div>
             <p>XiphQT is free software. It is released under the terms of the
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
             <p>Of course, bugs happen. If you found one, please <a href="bugreport.html">let us know</a>!</p>
             <p>Or perhaps you are feeling adventurous and would like to squish them yourself? Or
               work on some new features? Please check the
-              <a href="development.html">developers section</a>.</p>
+              <a href="development.html">developers' section</a>.</p>
             <p>More information about the status, supported formats and set of features of our
               latest release can be found in the <a href="release_notes.html">release notes</a>.</p>
           </div>
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
           <h3>More information...</h3>
           <div>
             <p>For more information about Xiph.Org Foundation and the free media formats please see the
-              main <a href="http://xiph.org/">xiph.org website</a>.</p>
+              main <a href="http://xiph.org/">Xiph.org website</a>.</p>
             <p>More information about XiphQT underlying technologies can be found on
               <a href="http://www.apple.com/macosx/features/coreaudio/">Core Audio</a>
               and <a href="http://www.apple.com/macosx/features/quicktime/">QuickTime</a> Apple web-pages.</p>

Modified: websites/xiph.org/quicktime/bugreport.html
===================================================================
--- websites/xiph.org/quicktime/bugreport.html	2005-11-25 19:34:48 UTC (rev 10445)
+++ websites/xiph.org/quicktime/bugreport.html	2005-11-25 20:03:48 UTC (rev 10446)
@@ -56,9 +56,10 @@
       <div id="the-content">
         <h2>Report problems.</h2>
         <div>
-          <p>If you think the XiphQT on your machine behaves in an incorrect way and would like to let
+          <p>If you think XiphQT behaves incorrectly on your machine 
+            and would like to let
             us know - this is the place to do it.</p>
-          <p>Please consider a couple of hints while reporting the problem:</p>
+          <p>Please consider a couple of hints when reporting the problem:</p>
           <ul class="spread">
             <li>It is possible that other users have experienced and reported a problem similar to yours.
               Please check the <a href="http://trac.xiph.org/report/16">list of the known problems</a>.

Modified: websites/xiph.org/quicktime/contact.html
===================================================================
--- websites/xiph.org/quicktime/contact.html	2005-11-25 19:34:48 UTC (rev 10445)
+++ websites/xiph.org/quicktime/contact.html	2005-11-25 20:03:48 UTC (rev 10446)
@@ -58,10 +58,10 @@
         <div>
           <h3>Mailing list</h3>
           <div>
-            <p>If you would like to contact XiphQT developers, if you have some general question
+            <p>If you would like to contact the XiphQT developers, or if you have some general question
               related to our project or need support with using Xiph.org formats you can use the
               <a href="http://lists.xiph.org/mailman/listinfo/vorbis/">vorbis at xiph.org</a> mailing list.</p>
-            <p>Please see <a href="http://lists.xiph.org/mailman/listinfo/">xiph.org mailing lists page</a> for
+            <p>Please see the <a href="http://lists.xiph.org/mailman/listinfo/">xiph.org mailing lists page</a> for
               information on using the list and links to the list archives.</p>
           </div>
           <h3>Developers</h3>

Modified: websites/xiph.org/quicktime/development.html
===================================================================
--- websites/xiph.org/quicktime/development.html	2005-11-25 19:34:48 UTC (rev 10445)
+++ websites/xiph.org/quicktime/development.html	2005-11-25 20:03:48 UTC (rev 10446)
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
       <div id="the-content">
         <h2>Project development information.</h2>
         <div>
-          <p>The work on the project is far from being finished and we appreciate any help and support we can get.</p>
+          <p>Work on the project is far from being finished and we appreciate any help and support we can get.</p>
           <p>The simplest, but important nonetheless, way of helping us is by <a href="download.html">using
               the components</a> and <a href="bugreport.html">letting us know if they don't work</a> the way you expected.
             Especially if the <a href="release_notes.html">release notes</a> state they should work that way.</p>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
           <h3>Mailing lists</h3>
           <div>
             <p>The <a href="http://lists.xiph.org/mailman/listinfo/ogg-dev/">ogg-dev at xiph.org</a>
-              mailing list is the place where you can contact the XiphQT and other xiph.org developers or discuss issues
+              mailing list is the place where you can contact XiphQT and other xiph.org developers or discuss issues
               related to the development of the XiphQT components. This is also a good place to ask questions
               about embedding and using the components' functionality in your application.</p>
             <p>Xiph.org also maintains a number of other, format-specific mailing lists which may be of interest.

Modified: websites/xiph.org/quicktime/index.html
===================================================================
--- websites/xiph.org/quicktime/index.html	2005-11-25 19:34:48 UTC (rev 10445)
+++ websites/xiph.org/quicktime/index.html	2005-11-25 20:03:48 UTC (rev 10446)
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
           <h3>25.11.2005 - XiphQT 0.1.1 released</h3>
           <div>
             <p>The first binary release is now <a href="download.html">available</a>. It's OSX-only, but
-              Windows version should follow soon.</p>
+              a Windows version should follow soon.</p>
             <p>Summary of features included:</p>
             <ul>
               <li>reading of Ogg-encapsulated Vorbis and Speex bitstreams;</li>



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