[xiph-commits] r10561 - trunk/theora/doc

lu_zero at svn.xiph.org lu_zero at svn.xiph.org
Wed Dec 7 06:53:40 PST 2005


Author: lu_zero
Date: 2005-12-07 06:53:36 -0800 (Wed, 07 Dec 2005)
New Revision: 10561

Modified:
   trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.txt
   trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.xml
Log:
References updated

Modified: trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.txt
===================================================================
--- trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.txt	2005-12-07 14:18:16 UTC (rev 10560)
+++ trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.txt	2005-12-07 14:53:36 UTC (rev 10561)
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@
 
    A Theora Packed Configuration is indicated with the payload type
    field set to 1.  Of the three headers, defined in the Theora I
-   specification [12], the identification and the setup will be packed
+   specification [16], the identification and the setup will be packed
    together, the comment header is completely suppressed.  Is up to the
    client provide a minimal size comment header to the decoder if
    required by the implementation.
@@ -674,13 +674,12 @@
 Internet-Draft       draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00        October 2005
 
 
-   {FIXME: reference to bzip2 or gz} This off band delivery method MUST
-   be signaled as "out_band/wkc/list_name" using the mandated parameter
-   delivery-method.  An optional configuration-uri MAY point to a
-   location where to fetch it.  The list is in the form of Packed
-   Headers (Section 3.2.1), that MAY be compressed using bzip2 or gz
-   algorithms As further explained in the IANA Considerations
-   (Section 6) section.
+   This off band delivery method MUST be signaled as "out_band/wkc/
+   list_name" using the mandated parameter delivery-method.  An optional
+   configuration-uri MAY point to a location where to fetch it.  The
+   list is in the form of Packed Headers (Section 3.2.1), that MAY be
+   compressed using bzip2 [14] or gzip [12] algorithms As further
+   explained in the IANA Considerations (Section 6) section.
 
    Only one list MUST be used at time.  During SDP Offer/Answer [5]
    client and server MAY agree on a specific list, that subject will be
@@ -705,7 +704,7 @@
    on.  These metadata messages are not intended to be fully descriptive
    but to offer basic track/song information.  Clients MAY ignore it
    completely.  The details on the format of the comments can be found
-   in the Theora documentation [12].
+   in the Theora documentation [16].
 
 
 
@@ -725,6 +724,7 @@
 
 
 
+
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 Internet-Draft       draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00        October 2005
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@
          Where "specific_name" is the name of the out of band delivery
          method.
 
-      configuration: the base16 [15] (hexadecimal) representation of the
+      configuration: the base16 [11] (hexadecimal) representation of the
          Packed Headers (Section 3.2.1).
 
    Optional Parameters:
@@ -988,9 +988,9 @@
          "protocol://path/to/resource/".  Depending on the specific
          method the single ident packet could be retrived by their
          number, or aggregated in a single stream, aggregates MAY be
-         compressed using gz or bzip2 and an sha1 checksum MAY be
-         provided in the form of "protocol://path/to/resource/!
-         sha1hash"
+         compressed using gzip [12] or bzip2 [14] and an sha1 [13]
+         checksum MAY be provided in the form of
+         "protocol://path/to/resource/! sha1hash"
 
    Encoding considerations:
 
@@ -1180,30 +1180,39 @@
 
          progress).
 
-   [10]  Kerr, P., "RTP Payload Format for Vorbis Encoded Audio -
+   [10]  Barbato, L., "RTP Payload Format for Vorbis Encoded Audio -
          draft-ietf-avt-vorbis-rtp-00", Internet Draft (Work in
          progress).
 
+   [11]  Josefsson, S., "The Base16, Base32, and Base64 Data Encodings",
+         RFC 3548.
+
+   [12]  Deutsch, P., "GZIP file format specification version 4.3",
+         RFC 1952.
+
+   [13]  National Institute of Standards and Technology, "Secure Hash
+         Standard", May 1993.
+
+   [14]  Seward, J., "libbz2 and bzip2".
+
 9.2.  Informative References
 
-   [11]  "libTheora: Available from the Xiph website,
+   [15]  "libTheora: Available from the Xiph website,
          http://www.xiph.org".
 
-   [12]  "Ogg Theora I specification:  Codec setup and packet decode.
+   [16]  "Ogg Theora I specification:  Codec setup and packet decode.
          http://www.xiph.org/ogg/Theora/doc/Theora-spec-ref.html".
 
-   [13]  "ITU-T Recommendation V.42, 1994, Rev. 1. Error-correcting
+   [17]  "ITU-T Recommendation V.42, 1994, Rev. 1. Error-correcting
          Procedures for DCEs Using Asynchronous-to-Synchronous
          Conversion. International Telecommunications Union. Available
          from the ITU website, http://www.itu.int".
 
-   [14]  "ISO 3309, October 1984, 3rd Edition. Information Processing
+   [18]  "ISO 3309, October 1984, 3rd Edition. Information Processing
          Systems--Data Communication High-Level Data Link Control
          Procedure--Frame Structure. International Organization for
          Standardization.".
 
-   [15]  Josefsson, S., "The Base16, Base32, and Base64 Data Encodings",
-         RFC 3548.
 
 
 
@@ -1220,15 +1229,6 @@
 
 
 
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
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 Internet-Draft       draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00        October 2005

Modified: trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.xml	2005-12-07 14:18:16 UTC (rev 10560)
+++ trunk/theora/doc/draft-barbato-avt-rtp-theora-00.xml	2005-12-07 14:53:36 UTC (rev 10561)
@@ -553,8 +553,7 @@
 </t>
 
 <t>
-{FIXME: reference to bzip2 or gz}
-This off band delivery method MUST be signaled as "out_band/wkc/list_name" using the mandated parameter delivery-method. An optional configuration-uri MAY point to a location where to fetch it. The list is in the form of <xref target="Packed Headers">Packed Headers</xref>, that MAY be compressed using bzip2 or gz algorithms As further explained in the <xref target="IANA Considerations">IANA Considerations</xref> section.
+This off band delivery method MUST be signaled as "out_band/wkc/list_name" using the mandated parameter delivery-method. An optional configuration-uri MAY point to a location where to fetch it. The list is in the form of <xref target="Packed Headers">Packed Headers</xref>, that MAY be compressed using <xref target="BZ2">bzip2</xref> or <xref target="rfc1952">gzip</xref> algorithms As further explained in the <xref target="IANA Considerations">IANA Considerations</xref> section.
 </t>
 
 <t>
@@ -798,7 +797,8 @@
 <vspace blankLines="1" />
 
 <list style="hanging">
-<t hangText="configuration-uri:"> the URI of the configuration headers in case of out of band transmission.  In the form of "protocol://path/to/resource/".  Depending on the specific method the single ident packet could be retrived by their number, or aggregated in a single stream, aggregates MAY be compressed using gz or bzip2 and an sha1 checksum MAY be provided in the form of "protocol://path/to/resource/! sha1hash"</t>
+<t hangText="configuration-uri:"> the URI of the configuration headers in case of out of band transmission.  In the form of "protocol://path/to/resource/".  Depending on the specific method the single ident packet could be retrived by their number, or aggregated in a single stream, aggregates MAY be compressed using 
+<xref target="rfc1952">gzip</xref> or <xref target="BZ2">bzip2</xref> and an <xref target="FIPS180">sha1</xref> checksum MAY be provided in the form of "protocol://path/to/resource/! sha1hash"</t>
 </list>
 </t>
 
@@ -1051,10 +1051,44 @@
 <reference anchor="vorbisrtp">
 <front>
 <title>RTP Payload Format for Vorbis Encoded Audio - draft-ietf-avt-vorbis-rtp-00</title>
-<author initials="P." surname="Kerr" fullname="P. Kerr"></author>
+<author initials="L." surname="Barbato" fullname="Luca Barbato"></author>
 </front>
 <seriesInfo name="Internet Draft" value="(Work in progress)" />
 </reference>   
+
+<reference anchor="rfc3548">
+<front>
+<title>The Base16, Base32, and Base64 Data Encodings</title>
+<author initials="S." surname="Josefsson" fullname="Simon Josefsson"></author>
+</front>
+<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3548" />
+</reference>
+
+<reference anchor="rfc1952">
+<front>
+<title>GZIP file format specification version 4.3</title>
+<author initials="P" surname="Deutsch" fullname="L. Peter Deutsch"></author>
+</front>
+<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="1952" />
+</reference>
+
+<reference anchor="FIPS180">
+<front>
+<title>Secure Hash Standard</title>
+<author>
+<organization>National Institute of Standards and Technology</organization>
+</author>
+<date month="May" year="1993"/>
+</front>
+</reference>
+
+<reference anchor="BZ2">
+<front>
+<title>libbz2 and bzip2</title>
+<author initials="J" surname="Seward" fullname="Julian Seward" />
+</front>
+</reference>
+
 </references>
 
 <references title="Informative References">
@@ -1062,7 +1096,7 @@
 <front>
 <title>libTheora: Available from the Xiph website, http://www.xiph.org</title>
 </front>
-</reference>   
+</reference>
 
 <reference anchor="theora-spec-ref">
 <front>
@@ -1084,15 +1118,6 @@
 </title>
 </front>
 </reference>
-
-<reference anchor="rfc3548">
-<front>
-<title>The Base16, Base32, and Base64 Data Encodings</title>
-<author initials="S." surname="Josefsson" fullname="Simon Josefsson"></author>
-</front>
-<seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3548" />
-</reference>
-
 </references>
 </back>
 </rfc>



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